under the bed

I'm tired  I'll go lye in bed little billy said but little billy fell asleep. Without his 

dad checking  under his bed and closet for monsters. In the middle of the night he heard a 

thud he woke up he remembered that his dad didn't check his room for monsters. he was 

shaking heaps!. He looked under his bed it was! His cat milo. Then  he went to sleep again. 

Then he heard scratching. He woke up. Then he looked under his bed and there was! His dog 

fredrick. He went back to sleep.he woke up He heard something like chomp. He looked under 

the bed and there was! his guinea pig fluff. He threw himself back in anger. And went to 

sleep. He heard something Like raaaaa. Then he woke up and looked under the bed there was! 

Nothing. He grabbed his flashlight and walked over to his closet he opened the closet door 

there was! A monster. “screams” He woke up that was all just a nightmare. He ran to his 

mums room screaming his mum said what is wrong little billy. little billy said I had a 

nightmare. Okay little billy His mum said. What was a nightmare about his mum said.

Then little billy said  i started hearing noises from under my bed. Then I looked under and 

it was just my pets then the last time i woke up. There was nothing under my bed. But there 

was a monster in the closet.

WALT: we are learning to use descriptive vocab in our writing

This is work i have written and edited myself.it is still a work in progress.

it was fun and easy using pobble for our writting.

do you think you would a monster under your bed.